Great description! Ants and frightened hedgehogs create a great picture.
Love the descriptions! "The air here was moister than outdoors, but in a refreshing way. Like the groundwater that bubbled up into a wide, perfectly round pool of water had permeated the air as well, soothing my lungs."^ This is perfectly described. I never really thought about how much cooler and more moist it is in a cave, but you nailed it. :D
You pack a lot of punch into a little teaser, girlie! You've got some great similes and metaphors going on here. Awesome!!! I'm not a big dinosaur fan, but you've got me totally wanting to read your book. Good luck with it!!!
Wow, great descriptions! I agree with Krista, it does pack a lot of punch in one short teaser! Nice!
I especially love the "people flitting in and out" like birds in tree bird holes. Excellent work, Kaitlin!
You have fab descriptions, really paints an image in my head. But I also get a good sense of voice! nice job, I'm glad you posted :)
Your descriptions are awesome. Great imagery. Nice job!!
I imagined the whole thing. Kept me reading. Really good :D
Nice setting! And I also loved the hedgehog description! :)
I LOVE caves. Love the description!
I missed it! I try to read everyone's teaser, but this week I was on the road so I didn't have time to do so until just now. Teaches me to have a life outside of writing : )) Hoping to read more next week.
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