Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Teaser Tuesday

Gone...
I mean, it's Wednesday now, after all!

11 comments:

CupofDice said...

Great description! Ants and frightened hedgehogs create a great picture.

Becca said...

Love the descriptions!

"The air here was moister than outdoors, but in a refreshing way. Like the groundwater that bubbled up into a wide, perfectly round pool of water had permeated the air as well, soothing my lungs."

^ This is perfectly described. I never really thought about how much cooler and more moist it is in a cave, but you nailed it. :D

Krista Ashe said...

You pack a lot of punch into a little teaser, girlie! You've got some great similes and metaphors going on here. Awesome!!!

I'm not a big dinosaur fan, but you've got me totally wanting to read your book. Good luck with it!!!

Karla said...

Wow, great descriptions! I agree with Krista, it does pack a lot of punch in one short teaser! Nice!

Kristin Miller said...

I especially love the "people flitting in and out" like birds in tree bird holes. Excellent work, Kaitlin!

characterize said...

You have fab descriptions, really paints an image in my head. But I also get a good sense of voice! nice job, I'm glad you posted :)

J.S. Wood said...

Your descriptions are awesome. Great imagery. Nice job!!

Mortem Twins said...

I imagined the whole thing. Kept me reading. Really good :D

houndrat said...

Nice setting! And I also loved the hedgehog description! :)

bethanygriffin said...

I LOVE caves. Love the description!

Deniz Kuypers said...

I missed it! I try to read everyone's teaser, but this week I was on the road so I didn't have time to do so until just now. Teaches me to have a life outside of writing : )) Hoping to read more next week.