Aw! Get back to work on it. This is an interesting concept you've got going right here.
OOOOh nice!!!! I wanna know more like right now!! Write, write, write!!
Get back with this!Its very interesting :)so WRITE NOW!AMNA DEMANDS IT!!!!Lol.
Okay, that's an awesome scene. Wonder what her mission is...
AUGH! This is awesome! I love how she's torn between the mission and getting to see her family again, and then I so love the last part where she's baaaaccckk!! I do hope you finish this one! It sounds great!
This is great. The moment he god kneels in front of your MC, I got really sucked in. Can't wait to read more.
Really great descriptions here. You nailed the reactions perfectly.
Aha, this is a new development from the first version. Veeerrryyy interesting. I like it!
Sounds intriguing. Does this one have a working title? I'm interested to see more.
No working title, nothing jumped out at me and I haven't had the time to give it good thought.Thanks everyone for the comments :)
This is pure awesomeness!!! Can't wait to read more of this, it was great!!!
Oh wow. This is really great. I love your description and the voice here. So good!
Whoa whoa whoa whoa. Must read more! Awesome tease!
Really cool scene. I loved the description when the god breathed out. It should have been an eww but was beautiful. I agree with Amna, write, woman, write!!
Yay! Can I just say how thrilled I am that you're back to writing this again?! I love this idea, and I can't wait until I can read the full thing. :D
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