Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Teaser Tuesday

Thanks for the comments, everyone!

15 comments:

Amber said...

Aw! Get back to work on it. This is an interesting concept you've got going right here.

Lee Bross said...

OOOOh nice!!!! I wanna know more like right now!! Write, write, write!!

Amna said...

Get back with this!

Its very interesting :)

so WRITE NOW!

AMNA DEMANDS IT!!!!

Lol.

CupofDice said...

Okay, that's an awesome scene. Wonder what her mission is...

Krista Ashe said...

AUGH! This is awesome! I love how she's torn between the mission and getting to see her family again, and then I so love the last part where she's baaaaccckk!!

I do hope you finish this one! It sounds great!

Deniz Kuypers said...

This is great. The moment he god kneels in front of your MC, I got really sucked in. Can't wait to read more.

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Really great descriptions here. You nailed the reactions perfectly.

Kristin Miller said...

Aha, this is a new development from the first version. Veeerrryyy interesting. I like it!

John Rea-Hedrick said...

Sounds intriguing. Does this one have a working title? I'm interested to see more.

Kaitlin Ward said...

No working title, nothing jumped out at me and I haven't had the time to give it good thought.

Thanks everyone for the comments :)

Paranormalchick said...

This is pure awesomeness!!! Can't wait to read more of this, it was great!!!

Stephanie Jenkins said...

Oh wow. This is really great. I love your description and the voice here. So good!

Emilia Joyce Plater said...

Whoa whoa whoa whoa. Must read more! Awesome tease!

J.S. Wood said...

Really cool scene. I loved the description when the god breathed out. It should have been an eww but was beautiful. I agree with Amna, write, woman, write!!

Milena March said...

Yay! Can I just say how thrilled I am that you're back to writing this again?! I love this idea, and I can't wait until I can read the full thing. :D