Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Teaser Tuesday

Thanks for the comments, everyone!!

13 comments:

Lee Bross said...

Ooooh nice! That is a true teaser, cause I so want to know how she is still here if she's dead!! Great job!

houndrat said...

Yeah, this is a total Teaser, lol! It's mysterious but in a good way--I want to read on and see what the heck is happening ot her!

Nice job!

VĂ©ro said...

I am joining in the crowds who want to know what is going on!!! :)

LizPage said...

Whoa. This so drew me in right away. I love edgy YA!

Bee said...

I thought it was beautifully written. Totally drew me in :)

Amna said...

Totally sucked me in, and now am putty in your awesome writing hands.

Great teaser!

Becca said...

When she started talking about how she died two weeks after her sixteenth birthday, and how she wouldn't get to experience life, it made me sad. :(

Kristin Miller said...

The first line is brilliant. How can you not be drawn in by a narrator telling you s/he was murdered and there's another girl, too?

Kirsten Hubbard said...

Kaitlin, I love it. You are truly rocking into an awesome YA voice.

Deniz Kuypers said...

This is great -- I really enjoyed it! I really liked "You can do plenty in the Afterlife, but you can't do that." It's so sad and yet, your MC sounds spunky. Hope to read more soon!!

Krista Ashe said...

WOW!!! You're opening is killer and totally hooked me! And your details are phenomenal! I sure hope you're working hard on this one!

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Wow, I am so intrigued. I really want to know what's going on with the MC. Please post more of this, ok? :)

Paranormalchick said...

Okay can I just say I LOVE this?? I fell in love with the story THE LOVELY BONES and I have srsly been searching for another story told from a dead girls POV! Hurry up and get this one on the shelves so I can buy it!! LOL