Thanks for the comments, everyone!!
Ooooh nice! That is a true teaser, cause I so want to know how she is still here if she's dead!! Great job!
Yeah, this is a total Teaser, lol! It's mysterious but in a good way--I want to read on and see what the heck is happening ot her! Nice job!
I am joining in the crowds who want to know what is going on!!! :)
Whoa. This so drew me in right away. I love edgy YA!
I thought it was beautifully written. Totally drew me in :)
Totally sucked me in, and now am putty in your awesome writing hands. Great teaser!
When she started talking about how she died two weeks after her sixteenth birthday, and how she wouldn't get to experience life, it made me sad. :(
The first line is brilliant. How can you not be drawn in by a narrator telling you s/he was murdered and there's another girl, too?
Kaitlin, I love it. You are truly rocking into an awesome YA voice.
This is great -- I really enjoyed it! I really liked "You can do plenty in the Afterlife, but you can't do that." It's so sad and yet, your MC sounds spunky. Hope to read more soon!!
WOW!!! You're opening is killer and totally hooked me! And your details are phenomenal! I sure hope you're working hard on this one!
Wow, I am so intrigued. I really want to know what's going on with the MC. Please post more of this, ok? :)
Okay can I just say I LOVE this?? I fell in love with the story THE LOVELY BONES and I have srsly been searching for another story told from a dead girls POV! Hurry up and get this one on the shelves so I can buy it!! LOL
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