Thanks for the comments, everyone!
I'm still gonna comment even though I've read it already! So nah! LOLI love that scene. It is so vivid, I can actually feel what she feels! Great!
This was very descriptive. It was liked you closed your eyes and was her.
Great descriptions! I love the descriptions of touch... Very vivid and you really get the drugged up drowsy type of feeling. Beautiful! :)
OH. MY. GOD. I loved this!!! Love your descriptions! :D
Beautiful tears, the reddest red I'd ever seen. WOW...love this!
Awesome! I felt a little woozy as I was reading, which is perfect. And I second Jamie's <3 for the last line.
That was so creepy. Especially because I really really hate blood. I like how it seems like she's trying to not think about where she is and how scary it is. Good job.
Very creepy!Gave me chills.
I like the red tears. I'm usually not a big fan of scenes where the MC is drugged--they often strike me as being weird and disorienting. But this was well done.
Loved your descriptions. And super interesting. Great teaser!
Wow....just wow! I mean, you pack such a vivid boquet of imagery into this wee little snippet. This book sounds awesome! Best of luck if it's the one you're querying!
Wow, such beautiful imagery. This sounds so interesting. Wonder wants going on...Would love to raad more!
So hooked here! Love the descriptions.
Great descriptions! And creepy!
This scene was extremely vivid. Creepy, but I liked it!
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