Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Teaser Tuesday

Thanks for the comments, everyone!


16 comments:

Lee Bross said...

I'm still gonna comment even though I've read it already! So nah! LOL

I love that scene. It is so vivid, I can actually feel what she feels! Great!

LM Preston said...

This was very descriptive. It was liked you closed your eyes and was her.

VĂ©ro said...

Great descriptions! I love the descriptions of touch... Very vivid and you really get the drugged up drowsy type of feeling. Beautiful! :)

Becca said...

OH. MY. GOD. I loved this!!! Love your descriptions! :D

Jamie B said...

Beautiful tears, the reddest red I'd ever seen.

WOW...love this!

V said...

Awesome! I felt a little woozy as I was reading, which is perfect. And I second Jamie's <3 for the last line.

La-La-La-Laurie said...

That was so creepy. Especially because I really really hate blood. I like how it seems like she's trying to not think about where she is and how scary it is. Good job.

Amna said...

Very creepy!

Gave me chills.

Deniz Kuypers said...

I like the red tears. I'm usually not a big fan of scenes where the MC is drugged--they often strike me as being weird and disorienting. But this was well done.

Amanda said...

Loved your descriptions. And super interesting. Great teaser!

Krista Ashe said...

Wow....just wow! I mean, you pack such a vivid boquet of imagery into this wee little snippet.

This book sounds awesome! Best of luck if it's the one you're querying!

Mortem Twins said...

Wow, such beautiful imagery. This sounds so interesting. Wonder wants going on...Would love to raad more!

LizPage said...

So hooked here! Love the descriptions.

houndrat said...

Great descriptions! And creepy!

Karla Calalang said...

This scene was extremely vivid. Creepy, but I liked it!

Sameer said...

Hi...

This is very descriptive.

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