Ha ha--this was fun! Nothing like a ghost (?) having a little OJ and tequila while watching TV! I lol'ed at the straw detail, too--*shudder*. I wonder if she'll have a hang-over?Really enjoyed this scene!
Ooooh I like that. And I love her internalizing!
This was super cute! Makes me want to read more!
Oh, wow. So she's dead and knows it, but doesn't choose to accept it? I like this. A lot. :D
I <3 the voice. :D
Ewww oj and tequila haha. I love her voice, it's so distinct!
Hilarious, I love her voice and her antics.
Olivia is dead but no one knows it--what?!? I'm intrigued!!
I love Oliva's voice in this, her rationalizing drinking, talking to the tv, being disgusted by alcohol, but then also intrigued! This line is awesome: "The tequila hits me fast. And it hits me good.And I love the very end about hiding it! Nice job! This one sounds like a fun, yet creepy read! Is this what you were being creepy about last night? LOL
Cute and quirky! :D Drunken ghost girl - love it. LOL!
This is funny. The last line made me laugh out loud. Great teaser.
Oh, man. That hangover is going to be painful. Poor girl.
Very funny and I love the voice of your character. Is she really dead? Really?
..invisible? Not quite, I'm afraid :]Great tease!
Great voice. I love her little side observations of everything around her, eg. the TV show, the bottle etc
I'm so curious about this story now!!! And loved her voice... especially when she's laughing at herself for talking to the TV! LOL
Me likes drinking scenes! LOLOkay I LOL'd for this bc I relate sooooo much:I opt for just taking a swig.Bad choice.It’s disgusting.Wine is gross! (More of a liquor gal myself) Anyway! Loved it :) The voice is awesome!
Great tease! I like the line about how if her mom thinks she's self-destructive, she might as well be. I want to know what will happen when she's found (or won't she be, if she's a ghost!).
Awesome voice in this.
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