Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Teaser Tuesday

Thanks for the comments everyone!

20 comments:

houndrat said...

Ha ha--this was fun! Nothing like a ghost (?) having a little OJ and tequila while watching TV! I lol'ed at the straw detail, too--*shudder*. I wonder if she'll have a hang-over?

Really enjoyed this scene!

Lee Bross said...

Ooooh I like that. And I love her internalizing!

Karla Nellenbach said...

This was super cute! Makes me want to read more!

Becca said...

Oh, wow. So she's dead and knows it, but doesn't choose to accept it? I like this. A lot. :D

Kristin said...

I <3 the voice. :D

LizPage said...

Ewww oj and tequila haha. I love her voice, it's so distinct!

Lost Crayons said...

Hilarious, I love her voice and her antics.

Deniz Kuypers said...

Olivia is dead but no one knows it--what?!? I'm intrigued!!

Krista Ashe said...

I love Oliva's voice in this, her rationalizing drinking, talking to the tv, being disgusted by alcohol, but then also intrigued! This line is awesome: "The tequila hits me fast. And it hits me good.
And I love the very end about hiding it!

Nice job! This one sounds like a fun, yet creepy read! Is this what you were being creepy about last night? LOL

CupofDice said...

Fun read!

Jamie B said...

Cute and quirky! :D Drunken ghost girl - love it. LOL!

Amanda said...

This is funny. The last line made me laugh out loud. Great teaser.

corrinejackson said...

Oh, man. That hangover is going to be painful. Poor girl.

Angie said...

Very funny and I love the voice of your character. Is she really dead? Really?

Lia Victoria said...

..invisible? Not quite, I'm afraid :]
Great tease!

Kathy Bradey said...

Great voice. I love her little side observations of everything around her, eg. the TV show, the bottle etc

VĂ©ro said...

I'm so curious about this story now!!! And loved her voice... especially when she's laughing at herself for talking to the TV! LOL

Annie McElfresh said...

Me likes drinking scenes! LOL

Okay I LOL'd for this bc I relate sooooo much:

I opt for just taking a swig.


Bad choice.


It’s disgusting.


Wine is gross! (More of a liquor gal myself)

Anyway! Loved it :) The voice is awesome!

Rachele Alpine said...

Great tease! I like the line about how if her mom thinks she's self-destructive, she might as well be. I want to know what will happen when she's found (or won't she be, if she's a ghost!).

bclement412 said...

Awesome voice in this.