"Disappointment settled like a boulder in my stomach." I loved that line!And damn Bridget and Earl!
These No kissing blogs are frustrating!! Damn you, Bridget and Earl!! Ah, sexual tension, I can't get enough of you.
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Ah, frustration on both sides for the reader and the characters. Nicely done.
Ah, that was brilliant- awesome tension!
I agree with Amna--damn Bridget and Earl!! Gahh *grumbles* ^.^
HAHA, yeah, I second those crashers Briget and Earl! LOLI loved these lines: “Is that not what you wanted to hear? You know all my deepest darkest thoughts now, there’s nothing else. But if you want, I can start giving you continuous updates so you won’t feel left out of my head, even though it’s not like you’d ever do the same in return.”Nice as always!
I'm coming to kick Bridget and Earl's butts!Great job!
Bridegt. And. Earl.AHH!Lovely job on evoking frustration... in a good way :D
You excel at writing dialogue. This flowed really well--as usual!
*sighs* “What are you thinking?” I asked, suddenly desperately curious. “Right now, what are you thinking?”<---- That seriously made me sigh (the good kind). Awesome writing and wonderful teaser, even though I wanted them to kiss :P
I really loved the last line too. Nice tease!
My thoughts at the end of this? "DAMMIT, Bridget and Earl! Get OUT so they can KISS!" And I don't even know Bridget and Earl.Yeah, that pretty much says it all, I think. :-)
Damn, damn, damn!Just let them kiss for goshsake!I like the intensity. And Dusty is an unique name :D
Nice... this is a tension-fest :) I love how at the end she's asking what he's thinking about. Typical girl thing. And then... damn! Why do people always interrupt at inappropriate times?
I love the last line! Darn distractions! haha
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