Thanks for the comments everyone!
I really enjoyed it! You are great at dialogue something I struggle with!
this scene makes me grin!!!
I love the chemistry! :D
Oh this made me smile :)
Ha! So cute!
Haha the chemistry is great! This is really cute!
ooh, this was cute! the awkwardness between them was just perfect, because there was still chemistry...
Why have i not read this one?? Loved that excerpt!
LOVE LOVE LOVE. :D
Lee: you will soon!!(And thanks everyone!)
Wow. Such smoking chemistry! I got chills just from him touching her waist!! And, you do have great dialogue. Cute, flirty banter! :D
Interesting snip! I like the flirty tone in this, but also the sense of awkwardness at the end.
love the character interaction and chemistry.grayson= swoon.YOU= awesome.
Awwww. This is why I'm glad you're back. This is so adorable and the dialogue is so realistic.
This is a really nice scene, and a very engaging dialogue. Loved every bit of it. More, please :D
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