Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Teaser Tuesday

Thanks for the comments everyone!

15 comments:

Jen said...

I really enjoyed it! You are great at dialogue something I struggle with!

V.M.Pettingill said...

this scene makes me grin!!!

Bee said...

I love the chemistry! :D

lynkay said...

Oh this made me smile :)

Karla Nellenbach said...

Ha! So cute!

Karla Calalang said...

Haha the chemistry is great! This is really cute!

kirstenrice said...

ooh, this was cute! the awkwardness between them was just perfect, because there was still chemistry...

Lee Bross said...

Why have i not read this one??

Loved that excerpt!

Kristin said...

LOVE LOVE LOVE. :D

Kaitlin Ward said...

Lee: you will soon!!
(And thanks everyone!)

Laura McMeeking said...

Wow. Such smoking chemistry! I got chills just from him touching her waist!! And, you do have great dialogue. Cute, flirty banter! :D

dystophil said...

Interesting snip! I like the flirty tone in this, but also the sense of awkwardness at the end.

Amna said...

love the character interaction and chemistry.

grayson= swoon.

YOU= awesome.

LizPage said...

Awwww. This is why I'm glad you're back. This is so adorable and the dialogue is so realistic.

Glen Akin said...

This is a really nice scene, and a very engaging dialogue. Loved every bit of it. More, please :D