Wow, the detail is so great here. I feel their fear, and I can just see the water getting higher. Amazing :)
Dude, what beautiful descriptions! You write so well. I <3 the "thousand lusters slurping soup in unison". Can't wait to read the whole thing when it's done! :D
Wow. I felt like I was in the tree home with Eve and her family because of your amazing descriptions. Wonderful teaser! :)
your descriptions are amazing! lots of tension in this teaser!
Yikes, I had my heart thudding for the family. That is so creepy!Very intriguing teaser and I'm so glad you're writing a high fantasy. It's such a welcome break from the apparent 'trends'.XD
Loved your descriptions here- beautiful teaser! Very interesting! :D
What a great teaser! I can't wait to read this!!!
Amazing! Love it!
very vivid scene. im kind of scared for your characters
They're in a tree and it's flooding that high? Whaaaaat. I like this concept. ;) <33
Very vivid and engaging description. I feel bad for your characters. Here's to hoping they pull through ... but something tells me your wicked mind has other plans lol
Great description! I could feel the cold water! Also love your MC's name! (Same as my daughter's.)
Oh wow, I really enjoyed this. At first I was like 'why is it rising so fast' but apparently this isn't the first time it's happened. What an interesting and exciting way to start a new book ;)I don't think it's rough at all.
Please, ma'am, may I have some more? :) Can't wait!
Ooh, the last sentence was creepy... nice tension!
Great tease, and good descriptions. I got nervous reading about the rising water :)
I can totally picture this andgot the cold senstation and everything. Great snip! Love it!!Oh and thanks for lookin' out on the bug pic! ;)
gorgeous, kaitlin, and totally gripping!!
Oo that was kind of scary, but I wasn't really sure why. I loved all the details we're given.
Very nice! Great emotion and detail. Definitely did its job as a teaser!
I want to read mooore! Very mysterious flooding, and I love the description of this world, it's very vivid :)P.S. - Just thought this was funny... The little "word verification" picture at the bottom of the page when I go to comment is "read mi", haha
Ah, loved this! Then again, you already had me at high fantasy. Love the concept and the flow of descriptions and dialogue!!
This is so intriguing! I love it!
BOO--I missed it????? NO FAIR!!!!
Hey, you took down your teaser before I could read it. What's up with that?
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