Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Teaser Tuesday

Thanks everyone for your comments!

25 comments:

LizPage said...

Wow, the detail is so great here. I feel their fear, and I can just see the water getting higher. Amazing :)

Kathy Bradey said...

Dude, what beautiful descriptions! You write so well. I <3 the "thousand lusters slurping soup in unison". Can't wait to read the whole thing when it's done! :D

Stephanie Jenkins said...

Wow. I felt like I was in the tree home with Eve and her family because of your amazing descriptions. Wonderful teaser! :)

iman said...

your descriptions are amazing! lots of tension in this teaser!

Bee said...

Yikes, I had my heart thudding for the family. That is so creepy!
Very intriguing teaser and I'm so glad you're writing a high fantasy. It's such a welcome break from the apparent 'trends'.

XD

Jenny said...

Loved your descriptions here- beautiful teaser! Very interesting! :D

V.M.Pettingill said...

What a great teaser! I can't wait to read this!!!

Amanda Hannah said...

Amazing! Love it!

Karla Nellenbach said...

very vivid scene. im kind of scared for your characters

Becca said...

They're in a tree and it's flooding that high? Whaaaaat. I like this concept. ;) <33

Glen Akin said...

Very vivid and engaging description. I feel bad for your characters. Here's to hoping they pull through ... but something tells me your wicked mind has other plans lol

Jill Wheeler said...

Great description! I could feel the cold water! Also love your MC's name! (Same as my daughter's.)

Nicki Leigh said...

Oh wow, I really enjoyed this. At first I was like 'why is it rising so fast' but apparently this isn't the first time it's happened. What an interesting and exciting way to start a new book ;)

I don't think it's rough at all.

Jess said...

Please, ma'am, may I have some more? :) Can't wait!

Kirsten said...

Ooh, the last sentence was creepy... nice tension!

cheyanneyoung said...

Great tease, and good descriptions. I got nervous reading about the rising water :)

Annie McElfresh said...

I can totally picture this andgot the cold senstation and everything. Great snip! Love it!!

Oh and thanks for lookin' out on the bug pic! ;)

Kirsten Hubbard said...

gorgeous, kaitlin, and totally gripping!!

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Oo that was kind of scary, but I wasn't really sure why. I loved all the details we're given.

bethany said...

Very nice! Great emotion and detail. Definitely did its job as a teaser!

Ellen said...

I want to read mooore! Very mysterious flooding, and I love the description of this world, it's very vivid :)

P.S. - Just thought this was funny... The little "word verification" picture at the bottom of the page when I go to comment is "read mi", haha

Leah said...

Ah, loved this! Then again, you already had me at high fantasy. Love the concept and the flow of descriptions and dialogue!!

Karla Calalang said...

This is so intriguing! I love it!

houndrat said...

BOO--I missed it????? NO FAIR!!!!

corrinejackson said...

Hey, you took down your teaser before I could read it. What's up with that?